5 Ways to Customize the Perfect Cover Letter

Perfect Cover LetterRaise your hand if you love writing cover letters…

Yeah, I didn’t think so.

If you find yourself struggling with what to write and how to say the right things in your cover letter, you are not alone.

In fact, one career coach, Hanna DeBruhl, refers to a cover letter as “the wicked stepmother of resumes” and I couldn’t agree more! I’ve heard job seekers say these things like:

  • I don’t know what to say in a cover letter, and doesn’t it just repeat information that’s in my resume?
  • I just change the contact information and hit “send”
  • I don’t bother sending a cover letter… should I?

So many don’t take this task seriously. And we resort to generic templates and shortcuts.

Big mistake!

One cover letter template won’t fit the needs of every job you apply to. You just can’t send the same letter to every job you apply to. Employers can tell, and it makes you look lazy. (See an example of a template letter gone bad).

To really impress, here are five ways to customize your cover letter and improve your chances of it getting read:

Remember That “To Whom it May Concern” is Passe

Not only does addressing a letter this way look old, but it also sends the message that you don’t care enough to look up the person’s name. Address the letter to the person who does the hiring. In most cases, this will be a hiring manager, not human resources, unless you are applying for a job in HR. If you’ve read the description carefully, there may actually be a contact name listed. If not, the posting may indicate who the job reports to, such as the senior project manager within a named group.

Go to LinkedIn, and search for that job title and department. Or use a search engine, and enter the job title and department information in the job posting. If you’ve done your due diligence and can’t find the name, use the job title one level above. If nothing is available, which is highly unlikely, then – and only then – you can use a generic addressee, like “Hiring Manager.”

Make Sure Your First Sentence is a Winner

Too often, cover letters are sleep-inducing. Don’t start you cover letter like everyone else by stating something like, “attached you will find my resume for your Project Manager job.”

Instead, lead with a quote from a performance review or recommendation that highlights some of your relevant skills or your work ethic. Perhaps you could begin with your value proposition (the problem you solve, who benefits and how you do it uniquely). Even dropping the name of an employee you know in your opening sentence can capture the attention of a reviewer.

Answer the “Why do you want to work at this company?” Question

One question every employer wants you to answer is “why us?” Explain in a sentence or two why you want to work at that company. Research the company, look at press releases and learn about some of its projects or clients. Do your best to specifically explain why you would be a good fit in the company.

Connects the Dots

The second paragraph of your cover letter explains how your skills match what the company is looking for. Focus on the specific processes, procedures or work-related skills, rather than the soft skills. Communication, leadership, time management and initiative are important, but you have to be able to perform the job successfully. Be sure you explain the technical or work-related skills. Be sure to tie your value back to the job and company. For example, if you say you have X years of project management skills, how will that benefit the organization you are applying to? (Think about the projects you’d work on in that company and how your experience would relate.)

Close Strong

The last paragraph thanks the readers for their time and consideration, reiterates your interest in the company and role and states your next steps.

Set the expectation that you will follow-up. Too often, candidates’ applications are misplaced or not received. The only way to know for sure that the company received your materials is if you contact the HR team or someone else in the company to verify your application was received. Is this type of follow-up really necessary? If you are interested in the job, yes.

Looking for a different approach to cover letter writing?

Liz Ryan, CEO of Human Workplace and an HR veteran, recommends using what she calls a “pain letter” in this Forbes article. This empowering approach requires research and knowledge about the company to whom you are applying, but the results make it all worthwhile. “Pain Letter users tell us that their Pain Letters result in call backs about 25% of the time,” she writes in the article. Here is a summary of the four paragraphs of a Pain Letter:

  • The Hook: Congratulate the company on something specific from a press release or news article
  • The Pain Hypothesis: Make an educated guess about what the pain points are for the company; it could be rapid growth, a new client, a merger or layoff – just to name a few
  • The Dragon-Slaying Story: Share a short example of how you’ve overcome a similar pain point
  • The Closing: Conclude the letter by inviting a conversation if there is interest

Bottom line: Either a classic format or a “Pain Letter” put in the effort to make it stand out!

The reality is that everyone receiving applications has a different opinion of cover letters. We never know when, and even if, our letter gets read. Read the job posting thoroughly, and follow the directions. If the company requires you send a cover letter, then do so. If a cover letter is optional, include one! This shows you are willing to take the extra steps and may make a difference.


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HannahAbout the Author:Hannah Morgan is a career sherpa, guiding new job seekers through the treacherous terrain of job search. If you are looking for no-nonsense advice, check out her site Career Sherpa, and follow Hannah on Twitter for the latest job search news and trends!




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